forget..
just forget and erase
the negative, the positive
the all..
.
forget
and never to remember
the one I was
nor the one I would be
.
burn..
I am already burning
everywhere and nowhere
on the inside
on my desperate soul
.
burn
my flame...
for you are dieing
and torch me from within
for I've been blackened
and scorched already
.
drown..
and suffocate it all
the voices and cries
of a silent soul
.
drown
my flame when it dies
and erase
all trace
of the warmth
it used to bring
.
forget the flame
it once burned for you too
drown this memory
and set me free..
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written op 2006-02-23, between 04:17 and 04:21
Filip H.F. "FiXato" Slagter
Written February 23rd, 2006
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Man, r u talented or what?? U simply rock! This one is simply powerful. I loved every bit of it. Your soul speaks volumes. Keep up the good work!
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To me my poems are expressions of the soul. An outlet of feelings and emotions.
And since the soul often even speaks faster than I can write, it takes little time to write it all down
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This poem gives me an image of water and its healing power. It is interesting how the verses start with the same word in pairs, up to the last one which contains all three! This was written in 4 minutes? That is awesome. You write very fast 8)
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