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Life or death decision

I'm given a choice between life and death.
Do I run away,
and grab hold of the knife?
Or do I chose to stay,
within this torment called life.
Life brings so much pain and so much anguish.
Life brings love, which drives me insane.
I fight for something that I know must end,
and when it’s done I ask myself.
Was it worth it?
Wouldn't death be so much easier?
To never have to wake up
and stare into the hideous image,
that lies with in the mirror.
Never have to endure these moments
that make life so impure.
Never have to hear the words
“I love you”,
from the person I love most.
No more waking up knowing there is something to see.
No more having the people I love,
standing right there next to me.
And now I find,
that I chose to fight,
because within my mind
choosing life is the only choice that’s right.

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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • twilight seduction
    April 21, 2006
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    Aya! I haven't read your stuff in awhile, I need to start back on your short stories!! Anyways...very deeo here, you put some thought into it.


  • BeyondTheSurface
    February 23, 2006
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    Cool poem. I could really feel the back and forth before you gave the final choice. Well done and good luck in my contest.