I made my life as you wished
i changed my life as changes of winds
I feel proud to be changed
i feel proud to get killed
All these are part of love
or Love is a part of these
In that debate i cannot keep pace
cause i love as a dove
It is the demon inside
it is the wrong turn
Only fresh a blood
needs to get burn
All in love
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Written February 23rd, 2006
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mmmmmmm )))) ... well is this what u call HATE .. ?? very nice one
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This is truly a dark explanation of "love".... I'm not sure I've ever experienced this type of love nor am I sure I want to... Very intense message!!!!!!!!! Very imaginative!!!!!!!! I enjoyed this read very much!!!!! I think this piece should have won a prize!!!!!!!!!
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there seems to be alot of passion in this piece, i like it
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Passion Unmasked
What passion must reside in such a fiery soul that one would bend the universal laws of self preservation. Let your love for such an underserving soul burn brightly as a beacon of hope in such a dark and unruly night as yours.
Life is pain, pain is life, where does love fit in.
I like it, I like it so!
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There are many meanings that can be depicted all by a complex being or crazy thing called love
I guess this is one of the perceptions defined by many of us n.n
A short write with few, nice lines
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changing to please another often leaves one feeling like this. acceptance from those in my life is what i am seeking, not me changing to satisfy their desires. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie
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Yeah bro come on this is pretty Nice
specially "It is the demon inside
it is the wrong turn
Only fresh a blood
needs to get burn
All in love" -
Thanx man i wish you all the best, please make comments on my all works please..
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nice poem thx for entering
xsophiexLF
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