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If I was a Rose...

If I was a rose
The rain would not be sad
The sun would not be death

If I was a red silk flower
I would bring a smile to the woman
I would bring hope to the man

If I was one of a dozen
I would smell like love
I would look like passion

If I was a jesture
I would wilt no longer
I would sadden none.  

Author notes

This is a french assignment it has to be translated into french now which is the hard part.
Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • Sunshinegf
    February 23, 2006
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    one of my favorite poems to read
    i enjoyed it so keep flowing
    your works on allpoetry.com


  • mutedme
    February 23, 2006
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    Perfect

    Hey DawnKnight I'm Madio I'm only 11 But I write really good poetry Part of Me is in the Other Catigory check it out I love this poem