When you look at me I can only smile.
This kind of love, it needs no trial.
Your innocent laugh that I long to hear.
To hold you close, free from fear.
I'd stop time, if I could.
I'd rob the world, I surely would.
I'll always be the one called Dad.
Don't turn away when your sad.
You make me laugh with the things you do.
I'd leave this world if not for you.
I turn around and there you are.
In all your glory my shining star.
Someday you'll be grown up like me.
but just for now please stay three.
-Billy the Kid-
Author notes
This is about the most important lady in my life, my baby girl Abbigail.
Written February 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
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This is cute. I really love it. You sound just like my father
nice job!!
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wonderful
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i love it. this rocks. It made me cry
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omg, thats such a sweet poem... ur daughter is gonna thank you one day for being there for her. i only wish i had a dad half as great as you are to her.
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this is so sweet... and i loved it..
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! this si sooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee and lovely ! thank you very much dear billy for this wonderful rhyme and best wishes in the contest !
yours
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this is so sweet and so full of love..
'Your innocent laugh that I long to hear.' absolutely beautiful words that completely blew my mind right off the earths scale
great write!!..
=) ~toni~
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