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Burgandy Skies

Cold waves undulating
Seagulls airborne
As burgundy skies concede
To the ocean's boundary.

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I picked Option #2 and the Naani Form... Hope you enjoy!
Written February 22nd, 2006

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  • grannyeri gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    Love this purple background - so vibrant. Never heard of this form before - will have to do some research as to what it entails. Colourful title as well.


  • xVowsareSpoken
    February 26, 2006
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    Molassis ---


    Thank you so much for entering my contest. Interesting form. I've never seen it before. I really like how you explained the night skies to be the color burgandy. I find the night sky to be so mysterious, so excellent, that words cannot portray its beauty. I think it's incrediable, and your poem was beautiful, I loved it.

    "Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn."
    Thank you for entering.
    Good Luck in the contest,
    Take Care,
    x PatientGrace x
    Jasmine