Verse 1
You make me see the light
In the darkened corners.
When I'm feeling trapped
You come and rescue me.
You're my knight in
Shining armor.
Chorus 1
When I'm feeling
So empty
You fill my heart back
Up with love again.
You're the one who
I'll always need.
Verse 2
Listen to all the silence
When I see you
The room fills up
With laughter.
Baby you're the one
I need to hold me tight.
Stay with me.
Chorus 1
Verse 3
Always on the go
Never letting go
You come right in and
Sweep me off my feet.
Telling me sometimes it's okay
To be alone.
But I'll never have
To worry
Because you'll always
Be with me.
Chorus 2
Without you there
Is no way.
Looking in your eyes
I know everything
Will be alright.
Verse 4
I'm never lonely
When you're around.
Together forever
I know we'll
Pull through.
Wrap me in your arms
My blanket of no fears
You are my life
I love you dear.
Chorus 1
Chorus 2
The world never spins
When I'm with you
I can hardly breathe
Together for ever.
I Love You.
Author notes
F&P
I write this while listening to "In Your Eyes" by Peter Gabrielle. Hopefully you weren't thinking of the song "In Your Eyes" by Kylie Minogue. *crosses fingers*.
I hope this fits your criteria. I might have to work on another one. 
I love the song "In Your Eyes" by Kylie Minogue. I got this song idea from both of those songs but mostly from Peter Gabrielle's "In Your Eyes".
Written February 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
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300 points, ended March 16, 2006, 8 entries
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thank you for entering my contest and following the rules. this is very touchingly written and a beautiful expression of love. a truely lovely write, best of luck. HG
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Damn. lol. It's suppose to be "You come right in". lol. Thanks for poiting that out. *runs to go change it*
~Camisha -
This is lovely, such heart felt emotions going on in here. In verse 3 you write "You right in" is that what you meant to put? I'm not too sure what you mean by that *scratechs head* but I am losing my grip a little apparently
A lovely write, well done and best of luck, Claire x
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Excellent Best Work
He's a very lucky man. I can not come between. I wish you Love!
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so sweet and gentle here. and I love your formatting here. thanks for sharing ..keep up the awesome poetry and good luck in this contest.
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