Many little girls just want to be a princess,
with sparkling diadem and long silky dress.
Alas! They all forgot that only in the story
they could get their shiny castle and glory!
If you want to be a princess from the past
than you will live in the cold stone house,
dirty floors all covered with a soil and dust
and on the attic, possible, family of mouse.
No radio, no TV, no pc with games to play,
maybe your bed will be covered with pink,
with few books days are going to be gray.
I have something interesting for you! Wink!
I knew a real princess living here with us,
she is always kind and ready for applause.
She is also fairy and she is writing poetry,
telling you stories about all kind of mysteries.
She does not need any castles made of stone
in Pixieland and our hearts, she has a throne.
Her name is coming from the old Persian land,
Shahrzad Maftooh, princess, pixie and friend.
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Written February 22nd, 2006
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This is Very Nice
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I came to this page from my sister’s author page. Wow, what a beautiful beginning, what an adorable ending! Our Shahrzad is really that fairy pixie among us. she’s not just beautiful in body but also so charming in her spirit.
I thank you kindly for penning this sweet poem for Shahrzad
~Vernal Bloom~
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Thank you Jim for this contest, so nice comment and applause and for a chance to give her our best wishes.
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Wow! Great poem, Sonja! You have my applause right away!
I love the rhymes and the rhythm, and the flow is great. You have a great prewrite here, and a worthy contestant! Best of luck in the contest! Jim
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I love this nice poem and it's unique name.
Love you,
Wish you luck in the contest.
You have two enteries?
Shahrzad
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Thank you.
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Very sweet and a different take on this than I expected. Great job
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Thank you Nena. when my muse will allow me I will write more for my pixcelious friends...It was my special pleasure to write this one.
~Sonja~
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Beautifully Penned!
OMG This is so very beautiful and so very nice... I truly loved the flow this poem has and the rhythm. It was kind of like singing a lullaby or something. I just truly loved the reading of this work. A wonderful tribute to the Pixie Princess!! Thank you for sharing your work with me and for the beautiful gift of your lovely pen. Blessed be, Nena -
Thank you Di. Your comment, and so nice comment, is rare more than a diamond to me. I am glad you like this verses.
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Hi Sonja,how beautiful this poem is, full of love and caring, you are a wonderful person and always brighten my day, super write my friend, you have my applause, hugs Di
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Thank you Elizabeth for nice comment and applause. We, pixies must be able to understand and to see borders between reality and Pixieland life . Well, we are not living in the castle like this one mentioned above...LOL.
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Dreamt of being a Queen
Sonja this is very sweet and beautiful,a tale of fantasy and the wish to be a Princess.How blessed you are to know one and write such a tribute to her.Love the imagery of reality overcoming the fantasy, the dust,the mice and all the things that are indeed the stuff of Castles.Great Poem.Elizabeth. -
Dreamt of being a Queen
Sonja this is very sweet and beautiful,a tale of fantasy and the wish to be a Princess.How blessed you are to know one and write such a tribute to her.Love the imagery of reality overcoming the fantasy, the dust,the mice and all the things that are indeed the stuff of Castles.Great Poem.Elizabeth. -
I can't recognize you James. Every day you are a little more naughty. Thank you for your sweet comment, but if you are interested about Shahrzad genealogy, you will have to ask her.
Do not laugh too loud ROFL.
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You are always welcome to visit all pixieland castles, and much more... At first, broom in your hand if you want to play and dance there. Vacumiser can't help without electricity
Maybe I have some special, interesting castle for you too
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An enchanted castle
Can all pixies play there? We'd have such fun This is a magical poem for a very magical pixie. Well penned and thank you for sharing. La x 
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Perfect!
You makes me to laugh loud LOL. Only you can do that. I am not sure that I will think about old castles this way:
dirty floors all covered with a soil and dust
and on the attic, possible, family of mouse.
What a foxy idea! No TV and pc games! I will have to show this poem to my girls too. I am sure that Shahrzad Maftooh is nice person and to be modern princess is great idea. I realy like it. I am impressed with rhyme and vivid pictures. But, with her name, are you sure that she is not the real one? LOL
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wow...I'm the modern Princess? That feels so great to be like that. Thank you very much my dear queen friend for your lovely warm kind nice poem. God bless you.
Shahrzad
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Thank you Linda for so nice comment and applause. Yes, Shahrzad is really sweet pixie and good friend to all pixies and all Pixieland.
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Thank you Kevin for visiting my site again. You are always so kind with your comments and applauses.
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Beautiful and so sweet!!
Oh Sonja, this is just wonderful!!What a beautiful tale about your dear modern princess, pixie friend!!! This is so very sweet How lucky that the two of you have such a wonderful friendship!! A beautiful addition to your already awesome posts!!! Just beautiful!! Linda
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A VERY SWEET AND LOVELY POEM
Aw... a wonderful and sincerely sweet way to say thank you for a dear friend. This is so lovely!
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