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Dark Soul

Pull me in all directions
twist my soul apart
the emptiness is deafening
holes in my heart
Wearing me down
losing myself
in this madness
conjured by the dark

It never ends
bis aufs Blut
just a short relief
demons release
solace in pain
takes me away
back to me

Twisted mind
epilepsy of thought
lost in the darkness
together alone
silence creeps in
emptiness wins
Visions that haunt me
and tear me apart

It never ends
bis aufs Blut
just a short relief
demons release
solace in pain
takes me away
back to me

What can it be
how did it come
where am I going?
How did I come
so far as to see
I've done this to me
myself-lost in the twilight
in the crystal moon of my eyes

It never ends
bis aufs Blut
just a short relief
demons release
solace in pain
takes me away
back to me
back to Me.

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Written February 22nd, 2006

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  • Guns Go Bang
    March 14, 2006
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    Hey lovely, I love your work sorry its takin me forever to do this just been lazy but your work is brillent.

    love ya! Jhonny


  • xeronik
    March 12, 2006
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    good

    does bis aufs blut mean on to blood? man, i knew that merely listening to rammstein wasn't gonna teach me the real language... i like this, it's lyrical, i kinda wished it rhymed, but it's still meaningful without it rhyming, i'm starting to wonder if any of your stuff has a rhyme basis, i'll have to keep on browsing your page i guess...