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The Sad and Sorrow

Days go by as the sun broke through the dark clouds
as my tears soak my pillow
for my clinically depressed soul cries out the black of everything that is wrong in my life
Nothing can ever go right for
my broken heart is dreaming of life rolled up inside of that
Dream saying that this is my life
                drowning in the darkness of my souls tears..

Author notes

I wrote this because I hate my life and what happens day after day ....
Written February 22nd, 2006

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  • PrincessofHalloween
    November 5, 2008

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    This poem is amazing. I can tell just by reading it the pain and stuff you went thru on a daily basis...but I'm sure it will get better soon. Great Poem and keep on writing!


  • twilight seduction
    April 11, 2006
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    Ahh, one line made me think aminute:

    for my clinically depressed soul

    Does this mean by the standards of society that you are dpressed, or by your own harsh clinicl-like examinations are depressed? Either way, or even if i am wrong, good analogy!


  • ohhryaan
    March 23, 2006
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    w0o0w this is really powerful and strong!!!! you did a great job!!!!! its really sad and i will be here to help you through kk peace
    much loviiin from Ryaaaaan


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    March 9, 2006
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    Wow! This is indeed a very powerful poem yet it is also sad because I know how this goes cuz I hate my own life also and the probl;em for me is I can not quite yet move away to get a new start to my life. Your poem shows you sad and you are desperagte for change yet some how in a way you also are trying to change your life a little bit. Only suggestion I have is live for the present and the future and never let the past get to you and in time you'll succeed nice write


  • BrandonHerron270
    February 25, 2006
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    This was sad. The background fits rather perfectly. I like the fact that you said that your very soul was crying. Not just your eyes or whatever. Great job with this and keep up the great work.


  • cake
    February 24, 2006
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    Desiree I really like this poem especially the images and how you'd want things to be less painful and be able to feel life more fully as you take it in. auntie cake


  • Dloz88
    February 24, 2006
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    kill

    Awesome poem des, you are making my poems suck =P


  • aRdNeK
    February 22, 2006
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    Another very powerful, emotional, and descriptive write. I know these feelings all too well. I'm sorry you're feeling so bad. I hope you get to feeling better. You did a wonderful job of putting your feelings into words. Great job! Keep up the amazing work! And hang in there!

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