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Passion's Blazing Flame

Deep-throated moans could be heard vibrating off of the bedroom walls as they moved in perfect rhythm. Images of the past had long been burned to ashes in their passion's blazing flame. She wasn't afraid anymore.

Kira's thighs eventually started to quiver, and their rhythm changed to a rougher pace until euphoria overwhelmed dampened flesh.

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Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.

Nah, nah, nah, nah...Part four.

For part one, click here: allpoetry.com/poem/1835495
Written February 22nd, 2006

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 23, 2006
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    Goodness, they're done. I can't add anymore to it besides them going to sleep.

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    February 22, 2006
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    wow, I hope this isn't how it's going to stop. this is getting interesting and I hate to cut the action short

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    Thinking of someone?

  • GauArrowny
    February 22, 2006
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    Euhporia ... heh, that sounds like you were thinking of a certain someone.
    Anyway, wonderful end to a ... four part series. Very nice. The main thing is she isn't afraid anymore.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    Aww, I'm glad Kira's fine now. heh. How could she not be with Zonny. Great little story

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    LMFAO! Thanks for the typo check...I haaaate typos.

  • Sadien Sathantae
    February 22, 2006
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    Euhporia is supposed to be euphoria. Xx;'
    And yes! This is hotter than the Lucky Splooge! =O
    -Moaned and such.-

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    Thank youuuu for catching the typo. And LOOK! *gasp* FIRST comment! Oh yeah baybeh.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    February 22, 2006
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    Lmao; oh my. THIS IS SO HOT. I want, like.. to lick the screen..?

    No; I don't. Because that'd be gross.. ehehe'. < <;

    You do have a typo, however, darling.
    She wasn't afraid oanymore.

    AND.. yes! Glad I could inspire you so deeply. ^ ^;
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