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Sunset

You’re like a sunset to me, sinking deeply into the setting of my skin
Flushing kisses tenderly slipping into crevices
Before turning into crimson nips and nibbles
And tracing across the amber skin that wraps us together
In a lavender embrace that slowly grows darker
Fading into the dark abyss of blinking spotlights
Blinking the affairs of the night in tender affection
Held in each other’s arms, wrapped in each other’s dreams

Author notes

Based on something that actually happened. Critical comments welcome, as always.
Written February 21st, 2006

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