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Your Love

A part of me
Is gone, dead,
But with your love
A part of me
Is here, to stay
With you forever

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Your love makes me strong, and weak all at the same time.
Written February 21st, 2006

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  • -Crzyme-
    March 1, 2006
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    Short and sweet. Britt. Usley i dont have time to read all the long ones. but you put the point right on out there and in only 6 lines. Very good.
    -stacy-


  • Lionslove silver member
    February 23, 2006
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    awesome

    Darkbabe: you said alot in six short lines. truly impressive. I was sad, then I was glad...but still sad. How did you do that? There's hope in this. Yet, i think my sadness comes from a dependent hope. My wish for you as someone so young and gifted, is that your strength does not lean upon the love of others...but all the beauty, gifts and energy thats' inside. And knowing the litte bit of you I do....i know that's true. I know you're strong inside for yourself,...and that is the hope I choose to believe in. And in conclusion, I will say...don't count anything inside yourself dead. i have a feeling i know what you're referring to is something more specific and i won't say it here. But from death springs new life...sometimes better than before. I love that you didn't blather on and on, as so many do, about such a complex subject. Poignant is the word often. Very well done. all the best, -encore-

  • Shine On
    February 21, 2006
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    Short and sweet, but I liked it. Nice job!