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My Angel

My Angel,
battered and bruised,
    by the hand
 that's supposed to protect her,
from all those silly boys
   who've come to break
 her heart.
     The one shes
 supposed to adore,
 the hero of a little girl.
     The rock she used
 to hide behind,
  the one who use to
     take her side.
 No one hears,
    her scream.
 She thinks she has no choice,
    but to go through the pain,
without a voice.
  She says no one wants her,
       neither here nor there,
  but me,
    Id take her anywhere,
         just to see my baby smile.
I hope she knows,
   how much we love her,
      and how welcome she is
  in our home,
  if she ever finds
      she has no where else to go.

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Written February 21st, 2006

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  • KirstenWar
    February 28, 2006
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    awesome

    Amazing poem!!!I love it.Beautiful words.Ur a good poet

  • falling through
    February 23, 2006
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    mucho mucho good stac! very touching...i felt the extraordinary feelings you were putting into your words. its great and if you were the girl, im praying for ya and im here...still praying and here even if it wasnt you...im here to talk...love ya gurlie!
    ♥lacey


  • LemonDropAngel
    February 22, 2006
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    awww so sweet i hope things get better *love ya* xoxo


  • mysticlabyrinth
    February 22, 2006
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    thats so great! i hope things get better. im praying for both of you. love you!

  • sweetheart4rain
    February 22, 2006
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    love you so so much...*millions of hugs and kisses*
    -Britt


  • bluidbabiegirl
    February 22, 2006
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    aw. love this was touching. beautiful.


  • Painted Warrior
    February 21, 2006
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    Wow this is amazing!!!! It is agreat poem. I don't know what els to say about it. It's awsome I love it. Great work.


  • DarlingStac
    February 21, 2006
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    Im sorry that you have no where to turn. Everyone deserves someone to be there for them. Im here if you need to talk. I hope everything gets better for you. *hugs*


  • different emotions
    February 21, 2006
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    Wow.. i dont no if u were the girl i the poem or the welcoming kind ppl or neither but still i wish i had a place or offering to go to like that... i need it right now b/c so much is going on in my life. good job.

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