On a lonely Mojave highway, his nomad soul was captured
By cobalt blue eyes shining through a dirty windshield.
Author notes
Just a line that has been stuck in my head for a while. Someday I'll wrap a story around it. lol
Written February 21st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Two Lines by fluofontis.
300 points, ended February 21, 2006, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Ahhh... To just ride off into the sunset...
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This was my two liner in that contest. Did you check out the winner's poem? I think it was Kermit ghosting under another name... -
definitely you would!!
...afterall you are good at making stories
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j/k!!!
uhmm this pictures makes think as just another loverboy going crazzy on high speed to meet his wish (girl) right through those long twists and turns!!
meeting too in the line with others waiting for your story
Ankita
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This is great Mark, I cant wait to read the story. You are very talented and Im suree your story will be a hit. Great Job,
Love,
Suzanne -
i will be waiting to read that story for if these couple of lines are any indication,then it will be a truly great story.there are so many ways it can go and i just know yours will be full of adventure.
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Brilliant two line start for a story that's waiting to evolve. Very discriptive and intrigueing.. Let's have the story Mark ! Excellent, loved the background..........mal
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Oh God noooo! Not a story! Finally you wrote a short one and now you have to go and ruin it with a long one. The long ones always ruin it for the short...ooo...uhh...nevermind..
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okay, i read this one earlier and it stuck out in my memory. it was also the most recent entry at the time, but thats besides the point. beautifully written and leaves us wanting more, while it is still complete in itself. great job and thank you very much for entering. good luck
LP&CG
Liz
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wow dude. that was good. this picture. awesome thanks for sharing this piece, keep u the awesome poetry and good luck in this contest.
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So many stories can be wrapped around this one Mark. Absolutely beautiful. Mysterious, promising, hauntingly put!
I thought of a love story, an accident on the road, a man falling in love with the landscape and becoming a wise hermit of sorts... wow! Really inspirint two-liner. You should teach Creative writing to kids!
Marissa. -
Short and simple, but still giving just enough to make a person think. Great work.
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This is quite interesting. Two lines to stir the soul and make a person wonder. Great job. This was wonderfully provoking.
Sharon -
waiting for the story
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