That curtain's got wolf-spiders
And I'm all alone again
Watching TV
What a loaded pistol
Hot curling smoke
And the feel of steel
What a pickle
So I pick up the phone
Get the love line
Bring over the maid:
Mexican, drunk, chubby, foul-mouthed
We're going to talk politics
she's going to ride the broom
Get at those corners
Pout with that big bottom lip
Mentions: father, crosses
farm, brothers, animals;
I have insight
Fingers...so quick
A magician
I make it all go away
With: a flashlight
Borrowed land, swagger
And sharp shovel.
Horus8 is down with the Pinhead
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Written February 21st, 2006
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You did go all "Brando" on her. I kept envisioning this mental one act play, with a surreal Hunter Thompson as the star.
This is really great, now, after the third read I have Neil Cassidys ghost watching the events. I like this a bunch. I find it full of the plump visuals, and bohemian flavor that I am often drawn to. Killer write!
Peace, Rob -
I had a boyfriend that looked like Brando. That was fun.
Thanks for the entry. I am sure Rob will dig this.
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Ah, very cool poem, very cool writing. Every man needs a maid. :-)
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This is at least the third time I've tried to comment on this, Jeremi... kept getting interupted by things like work and phone calls... so maybe now, at 11 PM, I'll be able to do it.
First of all.. the title really pulled me in, then that gorgeous face of my early heartthrob..from about the age of 16 until at least thirty... I was soooo in love with that guy.
I love the thought process of the guy in your poem.... it makes for an enjoyable read.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
Edited on Feb 22 because 'because I'm so sleepy I'm rum-dum
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All I can say is... the man put me off butter when I was a teenager..
hehhhe lolololololol
a quick fast fuck jumped over the lazy maid and made off with the dish and the spoons...!! moo moo moo...
brilliant -
fucking fab
...hummmm... i read this like a plenty of time... i liked how there was so much to think about in such a fast short amount of reading... i dont really have no idea what the eff its about... but you always write prime shit... so im sure it has some brilliant glow... above my head... but obviously great -
hmmmm.....Good luck in the contest. This is different than what i am used to reading, interesting though. I rather enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing and again, good luck.
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