my hearts in peices,
my mind scattered like the ocean over the world,
my goals, my dreams have dissapeared,
you have brought tears to my eyes everytime i saw you
the kiss, the kiss...
have i got it? NO!
but ride on by, like everythings ok,
it will all go away soon, all be back to normal
thats what always happens,
but you don't care, all the times i've tried to talk to you about it,
ignorance should not be given if you like someone,
though, break my heart if you must,
watch the tears fall beneath the surface,
c'mon, emurge them!
you'll feel better afterwards,
drown me in my sorrows,
communication is the key to any relationship, but to my friend?
if you like someone so much, why sit there?
why watch them float away?
is that what you want? to evaporate their spirits?
dry their soul, and watch their grinding bones,
watch their pain, and sit their doing nothing
but your good at that...
you know, i have realised, that everything you ever want,
even if you get it, it still falls down to the pitts of hell,
noone should feel happy. thats the plan, isn't it?
so please, ride on by, ride on by...
...for my valentine...
Author notes
well, um...glad i got dat off my chest. i'll leave you to thinking i'm weird, but yes...to my boyfriend, lol, great guy! (p.s. thank god he ain't gonna read dis!)
Written February 21st, 2006
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awsome!
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great poem writen really well. I dont know what has happend between u and ur valentine but im guessin its not good sorry to hear. hope all gets better.
Becky -
wow you know what.... reading this has made me realise wat a complete fuking idiot i can be some times.......
if you like some one, you shouldn’t just stand by and watch them suffer... for something they don't want.....
all i can do thu is just watch her do these things that u have commented on in ur poem.. i feel helpless and afraid of wat would happening if i did decide to approach, I’m afraid all my sorrows would be approved and finally declared as real fact. life so godamm bitchy is'nt it. all i can say is
"my hearts in pieces,
my mind scattered like the ocean over the world,
my goals, my dreams have disappeared"
as you so rightly put, that’s all i can think of atm..
dude this is some seriously powerful stuff just here, i heard what happened with ur bf, and i'm really sorry about all this stuff and i'm always open 4 u any day of the week okz..great poem btw dooku
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ARGH!!!!! I luv to bits.. its BOOTIFULL!!!!!! its so kewl!!! Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!
yes, YESH!!!!!! Its wikid poogy babe!!!
Cant think of any more praise...
Love ya poogy talk soon k?
Love phoebe
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he he he, ur such a lil cutie
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