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Desire

You Beg

For Me
When you feel a small hint

Of Need
Yet you know nothing of
The desire that fills my body with every caress

Want, Need
Synonymous for me
Yet you ignore me at each turn, refuse
Me, protest me, push me away.  I can't survive the pain.

Author notes

my new form again...
here is the link w/ an explanation
allpoetry.com/Poem/1823826
Written February 21st, 2006

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  • fluofontis
    February 21, 2006
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    thank you very much, haha im thinking about coming up with a name for my little form thing here and making a column, and then a contest for it but really dont feel like coming up with a new name for something. i'll write a few more, and then we'll see


  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    February 21, 2006
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    Veri interesting piece . . . graceful longing . . . and passionate remorse! Veri well written! Keep penning . . . and please . . . keep sharing!

    Makae Mae


  • prettyktm
    February 21, 2006
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    This is painful love and need, I also appreciate your poem 1823826. and also felt good summiting to your contest.