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The Storm

The storm shook our house
As my daughter snuck into our room, quiet as a mouse

Lighting struck and the thunder rolled
The wind blew hard, uncontrolled

Our electricity quickly faded away
A tree fell down across the street next to the local cafe

Madness struck our little town
As a tornado barrelled down

Suddenly silence filled our place
The storm has finally lost its pace

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Written February 20th, 2006

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  • Nature Song silver member
    October 10, 2006
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    Nice write as well. Glad to see some new talent. Very nice flow from stanza to stanza. Very easy to imagine being in this storm~ Congrad's on a great write! ~Sie

  • FrenchKiss
    February 20, 2006
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    I like this. It flows very nicely and has nice rhymes. It seems like this just came to you naturally, it didn't seem froced at all. I like this in a poem. Keep it up. Nice write.

    -Ray-