fragile in morning repose
dewdrops reflect weathered, teary sorrow
bruised, yet ever beauteous... summer's final rose.
Author notes
And through a window I did spy
Written February 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- 3 lines of beauty by Red Shoes.
300 points, ended February 27, 2006, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I love the rose... it is a beautiful picture,,, I couldn't read the poem, but the rose was perfection, so the poem must have been wonderful. Dee
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Thanks hon! I have so much I WANT to write. It will spill out eventually right. Lovely to see you're smiling spirit on this page me sweet chocolate easter bunny loving but no not an AP bunny, a real easter bunny, lady
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I don't know how I missed this one!! My goodness me woman!
Roses maybe prickly but they certainly are beautiful and are full of rich but sweet colours to suit anybody's mood
The 3 lines you wrote were just beautiful, like the rose Glad to see you're writing a bit again
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See how much I love the pic you sent me? I do. Reminds me of you too ain't too bad since I been missin ya
Well I dunno if anyone will ever find MY beauty but so long as I got my cats, who cares? 
How's the feline anyway? Wednesday? Ah thank my dear bro I do see a couple new gems from you. Forgive my lack of attention I gots things in the works 
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Nice picture you've got there Fae... wonder where you got it?
Huge
The bad is there to show the good... the beauty hides sometimes.... but it is ALWAYS there
Love and hugs
me
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Why thank you kind lady. Nice to know you look at the entries as closely as I do those in my own contests. It is as good or better than placing to be read and appreciated
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*final comments before judging* This is a lovely piece, Summers final rose. Just those words say so much!
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Merci beaucoup
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Thank you so much Betty
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bruised yet beauteous.... how lovely
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Beautiful
Absolutely, beautiful..Love the words .."Good luck in the contest"
Blessings,
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Thankies Merry. You got it. I have another picture of the same type of rose that is gorgeous too, and it has no petals slightly browning like this one-- yet this is my fave.
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Nicely pictured, sweetheart! Somehow, it seems to me that imperfection does not detract from beauty. I like the connotations I am reading in this. Good luck!
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Awww i'm tickled you liked this. Thank you so much for the opportunity... made me peek out of the writing closet
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Thank you so much RRRose. Suits you the name Isn't the picture just gorgeous? A friend went on a garden trip and snapped a few and sent them to me. I treasure them as the next best thing to being there! Yeah I am chronically ill Linda so I have been busy with ill-related junk. Thanks for missing me
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This is absolutely beautiul. Wonderful. What a lovely piece to wake up to. Thank you for you entry!
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I am so pleased that you got all this in my lil poem Tom and indeed to see you as well. I actually spent an embarassingly exhorbitant amount of time writing this. I shouldn't admit that huh
I have so much I want to write but the physical interferes
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Thank you Falfa Gal! Boy I have to get back to writing so I can say hey. And reading. Eeks. Thank you mucho lady great see you here in this wordy weird wonky poem
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You know, I always thought roses were ordinary-- you see them everywhere. Then I went to a state that had tulips instead of roses, and found I missed them. Then again a'adore les fleurs he he. Thanks my friend
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Tis hard to be romantic and passionate in three short lines. Even harder to capture the feeling of romance and a rose's sweet blossom at the same time. You have done a wonderful job at both. Thanks. Love, Tom B.
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One of nature's delicate beauties..leastwise they look delicate..especially when kissed by dew. Expressed so very well Fae both nature and romantic imagery bravo!
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So pretty, but I personally am looking forward to the first rose of spring!!!!
Roses are hearty flowers, they bloom long and do not give up easily, many people could learn from these last blossoms, there is no need to let go when three is still more to come!
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