Darkness hides behind me
Life’s fading in front me
Devils are coming beside me holding my hands
And taking me into the endless sin
Telling my heart to forget the promised land
Maybe tonight you’ll pay
All what you coasted me
Pains and tears
Suffers and regrets
I still remember my tears
Where’s my mind left me
And did’t even trade my destiny
Maybe tonight you’ll pay
All what you coasted me
Pains and tears
Suffers and regrets
Maybe tonight you’ll pay
All what you coasted me
Pains and tears
Suffers and regrets
I still remember my way into your darkness
No candles to light my way
No candles to tell me the truth
No angels to wake me up from my mare
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Written October 2nd, 2006
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thanx alot
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wonderfuly written, like silk
wow, this is like expensive slik, smooth, and fine to the touch, flowing across your mind like water, a truly wonderful piece, this going on my bookmarks list, i just love this stanza
"Darkness hides behind me
Life’s fading in front me
Devils are coming beside me holding my hands
And taking me into the endless sin
Telling my heart to forget the promised land"
it really shows the pain and the truth of life, weither its heart brek or other wise, this poem tells the story perfectly, with endless flow, wonderfuly expresive words and a sliver of pain, not enough to drown you but enough to make you cough the black water from your lungs and see that you could have drowned in the dark abyss of hert ache. wonder ful talent my friend wonderful
look luck with future endevors, and my the sun shine only when you have good sun screen
never give in
never give up
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if u really loved my NIGHT MARE poem u sould love my new poem Burning Mystories can u plz check it if u have time enough
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