A short little kiss
The look of eternal love
My heart skips a beat
Author notes
A short love poem for you. Its pretty hard to do a love haiku poem.
Hope you like it
Written February 20th, 2006
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heya
. Thanks 
I'm glad you liked it
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Hey what up. Great Hiku. Man, I haven't read a hiku in a while. Greta job.
Lots of Love,
Becca -
Beautifully done. Reminds me of my fiancee. Great piece, I enjoyed reading this very much. Good luck in contest.
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A VERY LOVELY POEM!
You have expressed your feelings so well with these few words. This is so lovely!
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wow, this is a great haliu, i like it. it speaks the truth of the light of love, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.
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Thankyou . I completely agree with you. The harder they are the more they mean to the authour and the readers, especially if they do a good job
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well im glad someone enterd a haiku they are hard but im glad u entered one its very good the harder they are to write the more they mean
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