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Fuck this

Fuck this

Fuck this aching, bleeding, and crying
Fuck these tears burning down my face
Fuck the worrying and lying
Pretending that I feel Ok.

Fuck the late nights of sobbing
Fuck the emotional walls
Fuck these feelings and loathing
The emotional rises and falls

And fuck this urge to write it all down
Fuck the desire to relive the pain
Fuck the heart wrenching, gut twisting catharsis of hate

Fuck it all, all over again.

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Take a look. The idea is to feel my pain, and anger, not for it to be a dramatically beautiful and awe-inspiring piece, I assure you.
Written February 19th, 2006

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  • Forms of Me
    March 6, 2006
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    WOW...girl..I hope you are ok....seeing something like this makes me feel for you. I think we all have days we have things come up that makes us feel like that....

    Dont be a stranger.

    LIZ

  • AMEgirly
    February 20, 2006
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    wow i think we all just wanna let it out sumtime! good job in lettin it out in a poem! it was awesome!


  • RomanticDreamer
    February 20, 2006
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    Thanks so much. It was just a rant I needed to write down. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks again.
    Sorry you are going through something similiar though.


  • mask of sanity
    February 20, 2006
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    isn't this exactly what im feeling at the moment. i know what it's like to just want to scream FUCK at the top of your lungs. good write reminded me of...me
    good write

    stef