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Are you still mine?


Phones don’t ring anymore
no mails from my inbox
nobody’s  knocking on my door
seasons changed,
my heart still hurting.
I played our favorite song
a thousand times,
hoping it will bring back some sweet memories
but all I got is this piercing feeling that I miss you
and I can’t go on like this anymore.
I want to ask just one question before I let you go,
Are you still mine? and If you still are, take me home with you.

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Written February 19th, 2006

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  • sense surreal
    July 30, 2008

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    huhuhu [sorry just can't help it]

    i could so relate to this
    what's up with ummm our guys

    i found this guy who rocked my universe
    and suddenly its nada on him
    and i've been missing him like hell

    atleast they must give us the closure
    and not let us sulk like a lost puppy
    musing, moping and not coping
    cause it's not amusing...uy

    atleast, have the guts to say its over


    Are you still mine?
    and If you still are, take me home with you.

    I love the last part
    I guess it takes a woman to be so much in love
    to tell this to a guy she loves

    whew!



  • WarmHeart
    May 14, 2007

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    im going through the exact same thing at the moment...ur words describe exactly how i'm feeling...especially playing the favourite song!! great write! kxox

  • jessieboo
    February 19, 2006
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    aww this is really good.... Keep it up!!!!
    Jessieboo