The rain falls down on you and me
The rain falls down on the forests we see
The rain falls down on the green leaves, then the droplets fall free
Author notes
Okay, this might not be as good as it could have been, I'm just used to writing longer stuff... Oh well, I'm sure it's not too bad... ^^I like rain.^^
Written February 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- 3 lines of beauty by Red Shoes.
300 points, ended February 27, 2006, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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*FINAL COMMENT BEFORE JUDING* I like this entry. I has a raw feel about it like a nursery rhyme. So green = I love the smell of trees after the rain. So clean it lifts the spirits.
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Its not too bad at all. Forest rain...I can smell the green! Thank you for entering the contest!
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