Whirlwind whispers springtime new
Two blossoms kissing in the dawning dew
Their loveliest spray their hearts bouquet.
Author notes
Written February 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- 3 lines of beauty by Red Shoes.
300 points, ended February 27, 2006, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The hearts bouquet sounds like evaporation, lovely crescendo here! Liked it very much!! Where you been!?
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Sweet
*FINAL COMMENT BEFORE JUDING* this was such a lovely entry. I am going to have a hard time with my final judgement. This imagery is sooo well done. I love it. -
springy
awwww, I'm feeling a picnic and two people kissing as it starts to rain. And the girl is wearing a white summer dress and long hair is dampening and its so springy. great write
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Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it Sandy. Thank you for visiting my AP place. ~smiles~ Your comment is a treasure; just like you! Thank you Sandy so very much!! -
WONDERFUL POEM
Wow these three lines are so beautiful. You have penned such amazing imagery with your word choices. Thanki you for sharing this wonderful poem. A pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you.
Thank you dreamer wind! Your wonderful comment put a smile upon my face. Thank you for stopping by!! -
Althrough it just three line but it bring me great imagianation.
'Whirlwind whispers springtime new
Two blossoms kissing in the dawning dew
Their loveliest spray their hearts bouquet.'
Great job. Love it -
Thank You!!
Thank you so much Red Shoes! Wow! You caught me before I finished editing the background! (hehe) I love it when that happens! Thank YOU for your wonderful comment and applaud!! Wow! -
This is simply beautiful, Whirlwind whispers springtime new! Wow!
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