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I Love You, My Sister

I'm tired, but can't sleep
I'm tortured, but won't weep
I'm so alone, but can't cry
I'm wanting to go, but won't die

I hate everything about you
But, for that, there's nothing I can do
You know, when it comes to love, I want to say it
Too bad, it's a recording, and I won't play it

You don't care about me
I don't care what you think I should be
I'll do whatever the heck I want, okay
You can come bitch me out another day

What do you want from me now
How can you be like this-how
Why should I even care
You should be but are never there

Just go away and leave me alone
That sucks for me, 'cuz we live in the same home
You aren't my mom, dad, miss, or mister
You are none other than my big sister

Author notes

It's sad, 'cuz out of all my family members, I'm closest to her... Oh well, I still have an emotionally fit hobby. ^^
(another late night, it wasn't meant to be about her, just turned out that way) ^^ (I really don't care anyway)
Written February 18th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    February 19, 2006
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    Being the bigger sister, I have to say I am thankful my relationship is not bad.

    Good write though, thanks for entering
    Autumn

  • loveandpainRthesame
    February 19, 2006
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    I'm not gonna say i know how you feel, cause i hate when people say that to me, but i can relate to this alot. My parents love my older brother so much more than me and they just set their lives to completly revolve around him. It sucks huh? Oh well, it's a great poem, very well put.Good job