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Two Hearts

Confusion setting in,
 sinking into disapointment
 at no one but
     myself.
 Troubles on my shoulders,
a love in each hand.
    Two gazes oh-so different,
 but both so enchanting.
 Two smiles from two souls,
     two laughs from two hearts.
       Two guys from two worlds,
  and me torn apart.

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As the simplicity ends...
Written February 19th, 2006

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  • falling through
    February 21, 2006
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    i love ya boo! i wish i could help too! im here if you figure out how. its really good!!
    ♥lacey

  • x PassionateKisses
    February 21, 2006
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    Awh, Stac.
    That's soo sweet.
    I wish I could help.
    Please tell me if I can.
    I love ya girl.
    <3 Shelby


  • Young Romantic
    February 19, 2006
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    Great

    Me know who this is about... I accidentally heard u reading it to your friend (I know who it was just don't want to spell it wrong, to many ways to spell it). I hope you can figure out who is the better one & have a great (not a good) time with him! Love ya! ~Heather
    Edited on Feb 19, 7:57 p.m. because ''.


  • LemonDropAngel
    February 19, 2006
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    aww babe this is great...awsome job and aww i wish i could help you figure it out things will work them selves out eventually