guitar in corner
only sings
when touched
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Written February 19th, 2006
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What I loved about this poem is that it expresses so well and metaphorically something we all should understand and take into account. There are so many wonderful things in this world that won't achieve their goal just because no one puts some effort into "touching" them, into making the guitar sing. Also, the word economy is very effective. This is powerful and thought provoking.
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Ahh that is a sweet one with nice imagery and a good combination of the sense of sight and sound. I found a deeper level in this pixiku in that the guitar is so nice and unlike many human beings who speak out of turn or who just blabber nonsense when it is least wanted. Some people talk out of turn and they must grab a lesson or two from this nicely penned short pixiku.
Congratulations on the Bronze!
-Charishma
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This does speak volumes. Well done. Congratulations on winning bronze with this poem. Enjoyed this read.
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Excellent
I like this. It is succinct yet has vivid imagery and speaks volumes of the love of a musician for his/her instrument and sort of gives humanistic qualities to the guitar. -
This made me chuckle a little. I was thinking of my exercise glider standing across the room-it works great, if it's used. Clever piece. Again, best wishes in the contest~vj
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Sexy is in everything darling so next time yo pick up your instrument release your sexuality........
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Haha, when I wrote it I never thought about it being sexy or sensual. I just happened to look across the room at my guitar standing against the wall all loney like and thinking that I really should play it more . Sort of applies to other areas of my life as well.
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Sexy and not offensive. Some do not fit that criteria in this contest
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melodious and with affectionate approach ...well written.
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Beautiful and sensual...I love the simplicity of this!
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