This Muse……
I really want to be your lover
I promise to be nice
It may only be here in cyber
But you will still need ice
Taking you to paradise
Is what I mean to do
So prepare now and surrender
As my love comes to you
My lust for you my darling
Knows no limits at all
My dreams and desires
Will entrance and so enthral
Feel me in your mind
As I start this ride
Imagine my caresses
And feel my love inside
Let your fantasy unravel
With me there at the helm
Sensations then will travel
Bringing you into my realm
From the edges of all reason
My lips now sear your flesh
My kisses rain all over you
Our passion now enmeshed
With words as my weapon
They’re all that I can use
It’s your imagination
That fulfils this muse
Author notes
A little tongue in cheek.....
Written February 19th, 2006
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Thank you T.o.P.....I'm glad you did as well...appreciated....I must now go find your poem Passion....(had to be careful how I wrote that...LOL)
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This was a vey well written poem. I too, wrote one about cyber love, called Passion. I liked the imagry you have portraid here. very nice poem. I am glad i got the chance to read it.
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Thanks for that Richa...(?)....appreciated.....No a little bit of a block ....but working on it......Thanks again
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Lovely work... Long time I didnt see ne of your work, this one is refreshing... thanks for sharing... all the best !
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You just have to continue...it's too good not to bring it back to life! You positively OWE it to your readers you see? Yes, it makes perfect sense hun! (pssst....get back to WORK)
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LOL......ok female chauveness....LOL...pt 2 may be a while....I think I've set it up so that it has now become a bit of a barrier....hence my promoting it for feedback....if I continue with it....I will be on my way.....my smutty stuff is else where LOL.....So this will remain a fantasy of fantasy....and not a smutt fantasy....LOL....did that make sense????
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intriguing
Wow! If this your idea of just playing around hun, you've really got some hidden talent that I look forward to watching evolve and grow over the years! By the way, STILL waiting for part two! LOL No smut to ruin it either! This was so sweet it's hard to believe a mere man wrote it! (I'm a reverse male-chavinist)
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Thank you....I didn't expect that response....it was written a little tongue in cheek....though which cheek I'm not saying....LOL....thank you
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Exquisite Distance
I don't know who you wrote this for but honestly, I have tears rolling down my face
These images exude the heart that lies within you. Every line and stanza is laid out as if you carefully placed each word upon your lovers yearning flesh........WOW Cynic!!! I still have tears............... -
Very nicely done, my friend!
Thank you for sharing and for entering in my contest!
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