Push and shove
hate not love
scream and shout
but what about?
Our old life?
love of a knife?
doubting feelings
dirty dealings?
Hit and miss
loss of your kiss
sweet to mad
makes me sad
A violent fight
disturbs the night
our partnership
turned to shit
heated words
aim to hurt.
drunks lash out
then forget about
that horrible row
that began some how...
Author notes
Written February 19th, 2006
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wow I loved the rhythm and rhyming scheme of this! great job!
good luck in the contest =] -
this is great.. i love the way it reads. i don't know if it's me.. but it seems like it reads really fast. i love poems that do that. good stuff here.
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great poem! this is the first time i've been on ap in a loooong time. im glad i didn't miss reading this poem.
there are two lines that don't rhyme though. i wouldn't say it ruins the poem or anything but it's wierd...
anywho, good write! i'm bookmarking it!
Edited on Feb 20, 5:59 p.m. because 'anywhow?'.
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