Rose with a sweetness
name was given with eagerness
happy and bright that lass
unknown to the momentary task
bathed in the glory
sudden was this story
Looking up with bated breath
eyes dried, sun set
Wondered on herself
why the expectation
no one is there
even for this dictation
lonesone and dark in the sunlight
Love and caress never so bright
Tangible everything except
that shadow.....
Feelings, relations walketh on that
like on meadow
Heart endeavours to cry
Eyes tries to be wet
Whimsical ! even they are not able to find me.........
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Written February 19th, 2006
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Thanks Vic.. there is nothing personnel here but sadness is withme and within me always so i really cant get away with it.
Thanks once again.. -
Thanksalot Jay.
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oo...what made you so sad? Its otay you dont have to reply it if I asked something too personal, but still the second stanza is a very powerful one.. and makes a kind of enigmatic effect on the reader's heart and mind....
nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing
*gives choco*
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up... your humble little friend...
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Nice and sweet...lots of emotions coming out in the poem...cheers Jay
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a most personal song one sings in a quite corner of the heart.beautifully written ,surely stirs things within a lot.
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Hi Anu
I like the truthfulness of the feelings.
All well wishes. Take care.
~shaitus -
Thanks so much for appreciating it. This poem is very close to my heart. it somewhere depicts me. Take Care
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WONDERFUL POEM
A beautiful and heartfelt poem you have penned Anu. It is wonderful. I love the imagery. I could feel your emotion in the words. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. Take care, Sandy
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