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Rains of Time.


Vigorous are the rains of time
Ardent do the measures make
The gift is natures shallow crime
Eroding what was given, take.

Advance, withdraw preceding tides
Shade or shine arrange like this
Nature need not take to sides
Compel rewards to our abyss.

Unswerving ventures seem to pass
Apocalypse, the yield we fate,
Who now command the surge of mass
Brew storms and gales like flings of hate.

Resounding churn of commonsense
Glaring fierce with sheltered awe;
Mountains raise like one big fence
Fate becomes our washed up shore.

Embellish the flight in paths sobriety
Who dwell with impetus heaven made
With Godly a sound, religious variety,
Made to adorn to enhance equal shade.

Religion composed with a very good will
Floods shall appear for cracks to acquire,
With reason shall sink with an impact fulfill
The definite range between water and fire.

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Written February 18th, 2006

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  • thewriterwithin
    February 26, 2006
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    Sweet-Dreams ---

    Thank you so much for entering my contest. I think this was a beautifully written poem. I loved it with it's amazing flow and beautiful wording as well.

    "Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn."
    Thank you for entering.
    Good Luck in the contest,
    Take Care,
    x PatientGrace x
    Jasmine


  • rosepoet
    February 19, 2006
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    beautiful poem.
    Nice flow and wonderful expression.
    Thanks for the read and good luck in the contest.
    Religion composed with a very good will
    Floods shall appear for cracks to acquire,
    With reason shall sink with an impact fulfill
    The definite range between water and fire.