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Turn around

Broken without your warmth
Broken without your soothing touch

I didn't know what I missed it
Until thing just clicked

I needed you more than I ever thought before
To completed my life so things wont go wrong

I needed your presence the thought of knowing
That you were with me for every morning

It was a comforting feeling to have someone there
To have and to hold when this world went wrong

Yet your plan changed and threw me away
To think that you actually meant what you say

That little word I thought so hard
Wasn't so hard for you to say at all

For it was a common word you threw around
To all your little boyfriends when I wasn't around

You had secrets to many to count
You wouldn't let me figure you out

It was all for fun, a sort of game
That I just got tired of playing

Things were so bad that when you left
My life hit 60 and never looked back

When you left my life picked up
Speeding along with no sign of cops

I hope that I don't lose this sense of freedom
For I would trade the world just to keep it

Author notes

It started off as missing her, but when i started to think about it there were more things wrong than right. So I changed it around to show that I sped off and didnt look back. Enjoying this freedom, that I really lacked.
Written February 18th, 2006

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  • Desideria
    June 29, 2006
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    wow i really liked this it was wonderflu!


  • angelsslayer
    March 8, 2006
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    Good write. I like the style of this.


  • Closet Poet
    February 18, 2006
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    well done of expressing this, nice ..journey, though probably hurt alot. glad your enjoying freedom.... nice write, from closet