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Drinking Your Wine

 

 

 

Hello, friend. You look low.
Is anyone drinking your lovely wine?
Let me sip
as a friend
for friends keep other friends alive.

 

time is watching us slip by…

 

Lovely wine
today, my friend.
May I sit in companionship?
If you leave to chase romance
I’ll sit and sip
your lovely wine.

 

can’t blame you, no time to slip…

 

Several echoes rippling here
in your aromatic wine.
So how are you?
As for me?
I must sit and slip through time.

 

time, you must not spoil this wine...

 

 







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a silly little poem...
Written February 18th, 2006

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  • wbiro gold member
    February 18, 2006
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    lol thanks, my bright college angel, glad it rated your patented comment!


  • SexyAngel0418
    February 18, 2006
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    WOW... This is awesome AP daddy!!! YOu did a great job on this one!!! I really like it!!! Keep up the great work!!!!

    Hugs,
    Your brightest angel