The day breaks the blackened wind,
The golden sun sets and spins.
Upon silence sits the light,
forever under the melting sky.
Traveling far and even farther ahead down this darkknit street,
deliverance shines through your soul as man apart fully sleeps.
Remembered paths taken yesturday, of roads below now froze,
many miles walked endlessly as the band played,
my heart is cold.
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Written February 18th, 2006
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My first impression was a sense of regret and sorrow, yet a glimmer of hope.
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This is a short poem, but very interesting and dark in fact, well done
thank you for sharing this poem with us 
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This was quite creative...with excellent pictures painted in words. Thank you for sharing your words and talent with us all, I hope you will continue writing
welcome to allpoetry
~Kristy
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