as my eyes fill up
as my world gets corupt
as my body gets week
as my mind gets meek
all i want to hear you speak
as i feel down
the color in my eyes in no longer brown
as i lie here on the ground
as the world spins round and round
as a tear runs down my face
i feel i will not finish my race
my race of life
i feel lie i have been stabed by a knife
in the middle of my back
but i put on the smile of fack
down my face my fingers rack
pain is all i see and feel
with each skin peels
from my face
and with each tear
your face begin to get closer
but i cant feel it
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Written February 18th, 2006
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WoW! I love this one!
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ive never read this before lol... i love you
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well you are welcome and i will keep writin them as long as you keep readin them ok?
i would like to hear from you soon ok, but for now i have to go i will talk to you later hit me back just to chat!!!!!
Tim50 -
This was a great poem i loved it lots you did a wonderful job on this keep up the great work and thanks for sharing with all of us on allpoetry.
~*!Heather!*~

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