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tears

as my eyes fill up
as my world gets corupt
as my body gets week
as my mind gets meek
all i want to hear you speak

as i feel down
the color in my eyes in no longer brown
as i lie here on the ground
as the world spins round and round

as a tear runs down my face
i feel i will not finish my race
my race of life
i feel lie i have been stabed by a knife
in the middle of my back
but i put on the smile of fack
down my face my fingers rack
pain is all i see and feel
with each skin peels
from my face
and with each tear
your face begin to get closer
but i cant feel it

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Written February 18th, 2006

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  • naughty-princess
    April 11, 2006
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    WoW! I love this one!

  • candyecane2002
    March 16, 2006
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    ive never read this before lol... i love you

  • Tim50
    February 19, 2006
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    well you are welcome and i will keep writin them as long as you keep readin them ok?
    i would like to hear from you soon ok, but for now i have to go i will talk to you later hit me back just to chat!!!!!

    Tim50


  • xxunloved07xx
    February 18, 2006
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    This was a great poem i loved it lots you did a wonderful job on this keep up the great work and thanks for sharing with all of us on allpoetry.

    ~*!Heather!*~