hear your breaths inside my brain
all the day whispering your name
my savior when I feel alone
chat with sweetness on the phone
massage my mind with lovers power
through busy lines of passing hours
warm misty beaches we run free
disappear where we wish to be
under waterfall beneath starry dust
bathing naked in cool water lust
ushering fruits to waiting lips
caressing curves on others hips
inviting hammock fire keeps warm
exposed desire erogenous zones
silky pillows pleasure our skin
just you and I within this din
music flows from love unfolding
fingers touch then give to holding
kissing toes and all that nears
erasing doubts that caused us fear
don't let me go devour me whole
captured flower with flooded soul
dreamers land never make me leave
air is lighter in me you breathe
I'll give you all that you desire
take me from this life of mire
you say that soon you need to go
my heart pounds pain yes I know
voice insists it won't be long
we sing a heart felt goodbye song
when we meet the earth will know
can't hide an electric light show
Copyright...Midnight Dove...2006..( all rights reserved )
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Wonderfully beautiful piece! We very much enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!!!
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well written
your other poem was removed from this contest. i said that i only wanted on entry per person. thank you for entering and i did love this poem. thank you again for entering and best of luck. -
Quite an interesting form you chose to express these sentiments- a bit of a shaped poem here - lovely overall presentation helps make it so wonderful to view as well as read.
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Awww thank you Rose, I sure know what it is like to be away from someone you love but look at the poem Cynic wrote...WOW!
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BRAVO INDEED....AN EXCELLENT WRITE OF UNQUENCHED LOVE AND LUST
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You know the circumstances of my relationship .... you could have written this expressly for me! These are all the things I feel so often. You captured the sweet sadness of long distance love so brilliantly, Dove
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Thank you for the wonderful comments
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wow! this was excellent, I loved the flow of the stanzas and the rhyming was crafted with grace, it didn't ruin the sweetness and tenderness of your poem. I extremely liked:
'massage my mind with lovers power
through busy lines and passing hour'
original way of thinking
well done!
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I love the entire package! Your wording, the way the poem lays out, the content...all extremely well done! Bravo! Thank you for sharing and for entering the contest! This is awesomely done!
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