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Poised

She flies happily
Where flowers abound she goes
Zany and flirting

Exquisitely dressed
marked vividly she does float
With majestic poise

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I choose nature/animals
Written February 17th, 2006

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 23, 2006
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    l so enjoy these short nature poems that say so much in so few lines. Very nicely written.


  • Nocturne
    February 19, 2006
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    Light and graceful. This poem is well written and I really enjoyed the language usage. It created an almost languid feel with the long syllables and easy manner. And the imagery is wonderful. Bravo.

  • Lora
    February 18, 2006
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    I can just picture the butterfly going from flower to flower, and she all arrayed in the beautiful colors of nature. Wha a beautiful sight you have portrayed. Butterflies are a favorite of mine. Beautiful! Blessings, Lora


  • Ellis gold member
    February 18, 2006
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    Beautiful Writing

    A very lovely poem.