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'One for me'?

It hurt me, so I lied.
Are you the 'one for me' kind?
In a day I fell in love,
but now its all broken in pieces.
Show to me that you're so kind,
Learn to love my soul and mind.

Author notes

URK!  RUN AWAAAAY!!
its...*dun dun dunnn*
THE SKAAAAA!!! RUUUUUN FROM THE CONTAGIOUS STUPIDITY!
...............see what i mean?
anyways, hope you like it.  i wrote it a while ago, 'cept i forgot all about it, and what with school and rehearsal for a school play (I'm in the orchestra pit thingiemabobber for Oliver!  IF YOU KNOW WHO I AM, COME WATCH!) and piano and violin and tennis, its hard to write at all.  im starting a fanfic tho!  so, when its starting to be posted, ill put up a notice!  and...thats prolly gonna be over the summer.  
ENJOY (or not) AND R&R PLEASE!  ^^
<33
Written February 17th, 2006

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  • Highof75
    March 12, 2006
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    Haha, sorry. I'm Angela.

  • Skaa
    March 12, 2006
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    errrrrrrrr
    who would you be?
    = ;
    sry. ><
    iunno who you are.

  • Highof75
    March 6, 2006
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    Awww... This is so sweeett!!

    Is Jessica in love?
    ....errr no, she's a man. HAHAH, JUST KIDDING!! You're not a man.

    This poem was sweet. I liked it. ^.^

    ....<3<3