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Through Your Eyes

In this world all alone,
Missing what should have been known.
All alone with no true friends;
Will it be like this until the end?

What isn't wrong here?
What's with all the anger, the hatred, the fear?
Will they ever get what they deserve-
Hurry up, before you lose your nerve!

Who are we; what do we do?
Why is it so hard to start over new?
Can anyone really change their fate?
Hurry quick, before it's too late!

You're lonely, I can see it in your eyes;
Look how your soul slowly dies...
How the truth is surrounded by lies...
I can see it all through your eyes...

Author notes

I dunno who I'm talking to in this; I might just be talking to myself again.  Anyway, this poem means question everything and never back down, you little punk!, or something to that effect.  And if you don't see that, you're really wyrd (weird, if you couldn't sound it out ^^).
Written October 15th, 2005

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