i have fallen so deep
you told me to love
and now i feel cheap
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Written February 17th, 2006
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Veldig kort, men det sier virkelig alt. Jeg synes det er et kult dikt, som kanskje hadde vaert bedre om det hadde vaert lengere, men det er det at den er saa kort som gjor det...bra!
Kult med andre ord. Haaper aa hore fra deg...hadde ikke ventet mange nordmenn paa denne siden!
Menecairiel -
3 lines of simplistic sincerity
create emotion
beyond comprehension
regards, blue -
Very Good
I liked this...Nice write -
Very nice write
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And that's all to it.
Thanks for sharing my wonderful friend.
Take care now.
victoria -
Excellent
Very good and straight to the point short Poem! Hits home with passion and emotion :-). Well done and keep up the great work. -
Keep up the Spirtual Writing
short/dark && yet got point across...good write
miz♥mollie -
After reading all my entries I feel there has been a major mis-understanding! What I required was a strong image in 3 lines. As a result I have made a decision to remove all entrys that dont fit this criteria from the contest so that you can re-enter. I hope you understand! Thanks you for you interest and I hope you will consider re-entering!
I hope this doesnt cause offence! -
enjoyed!!!
Never feel cheap ..as long as you gave yourself in love not lust
So much said with so few words...bravo on this! 
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excecllent
this is fabulous, short and sweet, hits the spot...great work...i wish you all the best of luck in the contest xxx -
Great! Thanks for entering and good luck! Comments at the end of the contest!
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