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grandma's burial

And one day the daisies came up
They bloomed
And I smiled

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Written November 23rd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Marmalade red shoes
    February 19, 2006
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    I have closed the contest early due to personal difficulties. Thank you for entering this lovely uplifiting piece...I adore daises.


  • Psycho Dancer ---
    February 17, 2006
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    excellent

    this is sweet and a great tribute, nice expression of your emotions ooh and thankyou for commenting on my poem much appreciated keep up the great work xxx

    p.s good luck in the contest!


  • February 17, 2006
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    A memorable tribute to your grandmother. Simple emotion expressing great love and sorrow.

    Piper


  • catz Moderators member
    February 17, 2006
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    Awww... this wonderful, LB to be able to see a departed loved one in the flowers as they bloom, is truly a magnificent and loving thing.
    And I bet Grandma is smiling, too

    Good luck in the contest
    Dee

  • Marmalade red shoes
    February 17, 2006
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    Lovely. Thanks for your entry. I will give a more detailed comment when the contest closes. Good Luck!

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