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Childhood

Childhood,

Followed
By the upsetting years

Of what
We call adolescence
Still is worth every brilliant moment:

Laughter
Tickle fights grins and play
Make each day an adventure, a world
Of mystery to explore without fear of tomorrow

Author notes

following the as of yet nameless form i invented based on electron configuration (as an escape from chem homework) which is explained here- allpoetry.com/Poem/1823826
LP&CG
Liz
Written February 16th, 2006

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  • Heartofacircle
    February 18, 2006
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    I just love the way you described that part of laughter, you did very well. thanks for sharing this piece girly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • magoink03
    February 17, 2006
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    i really likr this poem. i dont even no why but i am glad i liek it. im sorry this is short and its a usual comment but ifeel like shit rite now so i cant really think ... love it though


  • Phed
    February 17, 2006
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    great work

    Nice! I like this. It takes me back to fond memories of a time when life was simple and the world was magical.