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~All My Sin~


 

To feed the fever
instead of starve the lust
to forsake the sins
and savour the thrusts
To have you here
between my thighs
to lick the flavor
and hear your sighs

To give you all
then give some more
to suck you off
and be your whore
To please your manhood
and ease your ache
to swim in sin
as if a lake

To know your passions
to fulfill them all
to hear my name
within your walls
To see you smile
at days end
to leave you craving
all my sin

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Written February 16th, 2006

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  • Swtpoetryman
    April 10

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    A FINE PIECE, DEENA - IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE!

    This passed me hardness test and I'm SO GLAD that I stopped by to see it as you have been very kind and encouraging with your comments to me today. You have a way or making a man feel like putty in your hands with your rhythm and your rhyme and I sincerely thank you for it. I'll be back to see more form you soon and look forward to seeing more of you on my pages as time goes by - very soon!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Celticmoon
    February 22, 2006
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    OH yes yes yes............this one has got to be one of my all time favorites from you. I always knew there was a hidden side to you that doesn't come out to often. Glad you brought it out from this contest. I think I just might book mark this one and read it again and again........ LOVED IT!