I've tried to fight this
Once I got that first kiss
I knew I couldnt resist
I had to have her touch
I love her very much
I have to come clean
I dont wanna make a scene
They will be cruel, they will be mean
I know I have already seen
Her eyes drive me crazy
They make me feel so good, so lazy
Her scent smells like a daisy
Her kisses are so soft
Her touch is so sweet
Her eyes make me gaze
Her body makes me daze
How can I tell everyone
That I love her
I guess i can keep it a secret
Keep it hid
One day I will confess
Make my life a big mess
I know it will be worth it
Im a girl, who's in love with a girl
Author notes
This girl and me is already broken up but i think about her everyday and we are still real good freind..and we are both still bi.. but i wish i could have her back but she moved on..and i still havent told anyone..
Peace out
Written February 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- Bisexuals/Gays/Lesbians/straights by A Lonely Soul.
400 points, ended March 16, 2006, 16 entries
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painful
ooosh. me too. don't you just feel like drowning yourself but then find you want nothing more to drown yourself in her love? i know i do and that is was i got out of this poem: the "ouch, this hurts so bad but i love her so good" feeling. loved the line: "One day I will confess
Make my life a big mess"
that's how it all comes down isn't it? ah! good luck in the contest and good luck with HER. -
Very very good. Britt. Love is wonderful no matter who you spend it with. very good. Good luck in the contest.
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Man you did a wonderful job expressing yourself here. This poem has a good flow and a good rhyme to it. I really enjoyed reading it and it touched me as well. Nicely done.
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Sexual desire is quirky. Actually, love is quirky, too. It plays with your hormones and brain chemistry and drives you insane. I'm not kidding about how it drives you crazy. Loving anybody or anything drives you bonkers. If you are naturally a sensitive person, you can obsess on it and get even more nuts over it. I have been in love many times and it is wonderful and terrible.
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sad, but in my eyes its wrong for the same sex to date. but for others it doesnt bother. but you cant help who you love and that's somthing no-one can change even if they banish it. good job.
Toot -
great job,....just great.
sad, sexy, sweet...and in such good form and flow...makes me wish i could have a sex change lol great work. you're not going to have any trouble finding someone to love...and who will love you just as intensely....atb, -encore- -
well written
Ah, I know this feeling, well atleast I had to go through it with my first relationship with a girl. I think you did well expressing how you felt about her. I must say your form needs work, cause it's half rhyming and rest free verse, but it's still a nice expressive poem. Thanks for entering my contest
keep up the good writes.
Love
Ivy
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