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Monument Valley's Brush Strokes of the Divine

There is a surreal beauty in recherche' hues,
of sempiternal majestic panoramic views.
Horizon seems endless in wide open epiphany,
ancient monuments from the a distant past call to me.

Molten clays mingle with the sand stones of time,
A vastness so magnificent emanates freedom divine.
This place radiates a wisdom of natural proclivity,
muses of stories told down through the centuries.

The creator's brush strokes in multi colored hues,
expressive artistic talent shines exploding through.
My elated spirit finds a miraculous sweet peace,
in a land unsurpassed in beauty, tensions release.

It feeds my body and my soul in bathed delight,
a power much higher designed all that's in sight.


               ~~~Suseann~~~



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Written February 16th, 2006

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  • Autumn Whisper
    May 21, 2006
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    Excellent poem suseann, I enjoyed this, I remember holding a contest with a tornado in Monument Valley picture.
    Great poem once again.
    best wishes as always
    xElectricEyezx


  • angelsvoice63
    February 27, 2006
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    wonderful, absolutly captured the heart and soul of monument valley and how there is some ancient pull that some feel when they step onto that gorgeous red sandstone, it just simply vibrates with energy, like a low tribal beat of drums are in the monuments themselves. awesome
    angelsvoice63


  • Presence
    February 16, 2006
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    Nature comes alive here as you describe the vivid images... my mind is carried away and floats upon dry rivers of earth... to sing of the lovliness of the world and the Divinity of the Creation. Oh, how you have captured it so well, here Poet!


  • Mystical-Gardenia
    February 16, 2006
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    Beautiful!!

    Hello Susan thank you for this beautiful entry I can see this contest is going to be a challenge to judge and a joy of inspiration such wonderfully tallented poets Awesome vocabulary


  • Queen of Cups
    February 16, 2006
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    Beautiful

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