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Shake Your Booty

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Guess I feel like the old lady who lived in a shoe
so many allpoetry children I don't know what to do.
They are a blessing but are so many to remember
with so many birthdays from January to December.

So I guess I will just have to be an old granny boot
since I am quite hip maybe blue suede would suit.
Work boots are nice when found under the bed
loving with our passion till good morning is said.

Motorcycle boots to take me on the ride of my life
to take me away from the heartache and strife.
Hiking boots to climb the steepest hill around
as things go wrong and they crash to the ground.

Or maybe a hip boot when my life seems a mess
to wade through the crap, plod through the stress.
Snow boots are warm just like a heart full of love
rain boots keep me dry when tears fall from above.

Or maybe an army boot to keep the kids all in line
strong and very sturdy and like the sun they shine.
find an AP dad for the kids in an army battalion
I might be a cowgirl boot, rope me a fine stallion.

Combat boots when you're looking for a fight
the possibilities are endless so a boot I'll be.
But remember these boots are made for walking
so you better remember to be very nice to me.



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Yipper, I shall be a BOOT.
Written February 16th, 2006

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  • Sandygram silver member
    February 23, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    I am so glad you smiled. I kind of relate to the hip boot too. Thank you for reading and commenting. Take care, Sandy


  • Iceman50
    February 23, 2006
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    Hello Sandy, Your write is terrific! I must agree that you covered all the possible boots available on the market!!! I enjoyed your poem, it was very creative and well written! I think my favorite pair you described was the "hip boot" very funny!! Good luck to you in this contest! Gary


  • queenie
    February 21, 2006
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    well i think you covered a wide spectrum of boots and you did it so well.i think i like the line about the rain boots the best though.great image too.this is a real contender for the contest.

  • Sandygram silver member
    February 20, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Oh I am glad you enjoyed this Michael. Yes Mrs.looking for Combat boots is smiling, and ready for a combat. These boots are made for walking!! Take care my friend.


  • Arsenic-
    February 19, 2006
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    Oh that was sooo funny, but there is so much truth thrown in to make it all plausable. Well done, Mrs. looking for Combat Boots! I can see that. Good job. Michael.


  • Autumn Whisper
    February 19, 2006
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    Excellent poem grandma, you have such talent, please, never ever stop writing, keep up the good work always
    best wishes as always
    grandson


  • Thebigreveal
    February 19, 2006
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    lol I loved this poem it was funny. Well written and just glides together well


  • whispersoftly
    February 17, 2006
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    Fabulous

    FABULOUS this is an outstanding write infact im blown away by this! excellant idea and made me smile i smiled when i saw the pic from the nursery rhyme best of luck in the contest excellant write


  • luckyclover
    February 17, 2006
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    OMG I LOVED this!! It has got to be the cuttest thing I have ever read!! So playful and spirted, LOVED IT!!! Keep up the good work!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 16, 2006
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    Cooooool piece A boot, huh? Hmmmm; I'll be nice and not say anything, lmao! This was too cute, my friend; very much enjoyed reading! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!


  • Sonja
    February 16, 2006
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    Bravo Sandy for this boot(y) fairy tale Nice and interesting story and very nice description of all kind of boots. To me, first stanza is absolutely ma favourites.
    ~Sonja~


  • jasminerose
    February 16, 2006
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    Wonderful and clever!!!

    Hi Sandy... A boot huh??? Well I will certainly be nice to you!!! I think you covered all the boots possible!!! Very clever Sandy as always!! I am honored that you entered!! Thanks for the wonderful entry,, I am smiling.. great pic too!!! Linda

  • Praise his name
    February 16, 2006
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    Lol mom I really love this one You do have many allpoetry kids though. I love the new write I think im going to post something new for myself.
    God bless
    Mary

  • Sandygram silver member
    February 16, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you John, always a pleasure to hear from you. I do hope you aree having a good day. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy


  • Ellis gold member
    February 16, 2006
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    Outstanding writing!

    This is so clever, and what gets me is that at the same time that it is so funny, -- I know that it is also TRUE (because I know you!)! Very terrific poem! Yes! --Tiki Cat


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 16, 2006
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    What creativity here - any other kinds of shoes, boots you missed here? Really a funny verse to read - easy to understand as well. Good rhythm and rhyme - very creative.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    February 16, 2006
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    LOL! I love this. The imagery in this was amazing! Wish I had an applause left to give but I don't. Anyway, Great Write!


  • masterblaster gold member
    February 16, 2006
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    Hi, it's great, a super write. loved it, hugs Di


  • brokenbeauty921
    February 16, 2006
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    Lol. I loved this write. It was so imaginative, and wonderfully written. Great rhymes!!! I laughed out loud when I read it, and I really love anything to do with shoes, because I am a shoeaholic. Is that even a word?! Lol. ANyways, great write, and I hope to read more of your work! Good job!
    Elyse


  • Iohagh
    February 16, 2006
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    Absolutely splendid as I applaud.

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