Wake up in the morning
Go to sleep at night
I'm not denying I was wrong
But I think you were right
They say they remember
I just want to forget
Tomorrow's a burden
I don't want to deal with yet
So far I've been fine
Now I'm singing a different tune
Too late, too fast
But then it's over soon
You wake up in the morning
Cry yourself to sleep at night
I knew you were wrong
And maybe this time I was right
Forget about what I said
Take my lies and turn it around
Some things are bound to come out wrong
Getting mixed up, you're still feeling down
It's like a stormy day
And you want to go outside
In a different light
Just continue to hide
I dread the coming of the day
And I lie awake at night
Forgive me because I'm wrong
And maybe things will be alright
Author notes
Hmmmmm. This wasn't a dark poem, surprise surprise. Sorry I was tardy, it was Danny's fault. 
Written February 16th, 2006
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Ahh, I liked this one. It was much easier to follow then the other I read...lol! Anyway, I really liked this part:
"It's like a stormy day
And you want to go outside
In a different light
Just continue to hide"
It just reminded me of a few diff. things. Anyway, keep writing! - SNAP -
this was soooooooooooooooo good, no great, no magnificent, no supercalifragilisticexpealidoutous - think i spelled that right. this was hands down the best damn love poem i think i've ever read from anyone it really was superb i mean you totally made the rhyming work for you and the emotion was so easily felt and voiced; awesome job steph really stupendous - now im off to find other words to describe how brilliant this was tata
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OMG!!! Steph!! This poem was awesome!!! I loved the rhyme scheme!! And the..whatcha-ma-call-it...message(?) was kool too!!! ^_^ I really like the lines:
They say they remember
I just want to forget
Tomorrow's a burden
I don't want to deal with yet
AwEsOmE GiRl!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!!!! I wish I could write a poem like this!! But my brain is all dried up!!
LoL! Writer's Block SuX!!!
But kool poem Steph!!! Luv Ya!!!
Pyro Freak
P.S. - I had LOTSA fun at the horse show today...even if I did freeze my bootay off!
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I like it!!! It's the type of poem you give to someone not let every one read but I'm glad you let us all read it. It's amazing there are some rocky parts but it relates to the love and life of teens. You repeated but didn't you made it like life moving forward through good and bad but making it all even out.
encore
NoL
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