I imagined you, my creation. Inhaling you deep into my alluring conscious. Your travel was thorough; there is not a touch of me you do not caress. Tracing my thoughts, chasing my dream, I discovered you upon the sand.
Pining desire; I fulfill a wonder to envision my dream. A creation I desire. My creation, you are my wandering destiny. In the sands of time, you created me. Prancing in the pleasure of passions bliss I found your name spelled across the sand.
I don't want to lose what I found. Each day that I dream, I inhale you. I create me. A creation I desire. I don't want to forget what I seek. Each day that I breathe, I exhale you. I breathe me; I survive.
Where I once burrowed, I dug deep, I imagined you, my creation in the sand.
Author notes
Written February 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- Voyage of Body and Soul - CONTEST by astralshepherd.
300 points, ended March 2, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you, again and again!!
Oh Lady Rose! I embrace your so thoughtful heart. Your gesture is so appreciated. No one has wished to promote my work before, and what an honor it is that you wished to. You read this poem rightly!! Exact to your comment, “Like I was a kid again putting designs in the sand filled with dreams and wishes”. What a lovely comment this is! Thank you dear, I thank you dearly. -
Thank You Titus!
Thank you Titus!! Your comments are never-ending smiles for me. I look forward to them as much as I look forward to new writes by you! Thank you dearly for your forever-lasting kindness! You're amazing!! Thank you! -
Thank you Susan
Susan, I must apologize for not leaving you a thank you message sooner. I did go to your site and read, enjoyed and commented on your wonderful work. Oh but I noticed that I forgot to come back here and thank you on this page! Forgive me please? And now, Susan, I thank you so very much for your supporting comment! Comments are as important as the pen, and I so do appreciate you taking the time to comment on mine! Thank you again!! -
Very uplifing quality in this piece. Has a sing-song in it, like I was a kid again putting designs in the sand. Filled with dreams and wishes. Long ago hopes that you just would wish to reach, grab and hold to your heart merely to believe. Good luck in the contest. Wish I had the points to promote this. : f rose
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To dig up something up what fantastic means and what decides our hopes and wishes, and becomes them all wrapped up. Happy Christmas! hee! Nice yearnings, something within the range of being grasped no doubt!
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Lovely heartfelt write. Good Luck in the contest.
Susan
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Dear Sweet-Dreams, I am taking this opportunity to thank you for entering “Voyage of Body and Soul.” I appreciate the entry of your poem, “Creation In The Sand.” into this contest. This is a “boiler-plate” note that is placed on all the entries. It is here to assure you that I have indeed read this entry and made my preliminary notes. Should you decide to make any substantive changes to your entry, (which is perfectly acceptable, up to the deadline) please let me know so that I may make the effort to review any changes and revise my notations accordingly. You will not be penalized in any manner if you do make changes before the deadline; just, please, let me know. If you have any questions that I have not addressed in the contest notes, or if anything is unclear to you, please, do not hesitate to ask. I wish you well in this contest and again thank you for taking the time to enter. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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